I love to write. I love to read beautiful literature. We are given the gift of knowledge and words – and I love to use mine to convey my emotions in a way that I hope others can relate to. Poetry is my main passion in writing. It wakens my soul and gives life to every corner of my mind. I hope that you enjoy my blog. All feedback is appreciated. Please remember that I own, as the author, all of my blog posts, and do not give permission for reproduction of any type. Thank you for visiting!
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I hope you enjoy reading my poems. They are a piece of myself. I have always loved to write poems and I love to share them with others. Please do not reproduce.
If you would like to use my poetry in some way, or have a question please feel free to email me at: lesliexsimpson@gmail.com
I appreciate all comments/feedback. Thank you! :)
-Leslie Simpson
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Your work has great merit. I think “Masochistic Love” is a piece that should be viewed as a literary art and can hold its own with some of the greats. I have looked over quite a few pieces and they have been expressed in sincerity by you. I would add one critique, and that is to avoid repetitive rhyming patterns, and bending phrase structure for the sake of rhyming, it distorts the intensity of the statement and the flow is broken. The reader is left to ask, why did she do that and it must be answered with for the sake of rhyming, which now conflicts with the depth of your talent. I am a fan and this is to encourage you strongly and let you know I am a fan.
Marcus T.
Thank you. I appreciate your honesty and am glad that you like my poetry. I have often thought about what you said, and seeing it from someone else really helps. I will take this into great consideration when writing, so that my emotion comes across purely. Thanks again.